Tuesday, 14 March 2017

My Sea Week Writing

For Sea Week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment.😏

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Zac.
    I like that in your sea week writing you explained the problems with the ocean. Next time you could explain the jobs a bit more, but other than that you did a good job. From Mackenzie.

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  2. Hi Zac,

    This is a really good piece of writing by you Zac, you have structured your paragraphs very well and put a lot of thought into them. Your expanation on some of the issues were also very good and what we can do to help. I loved your visual pictures and choice of colours for your slides too. Well done Zac, keep it up eh! Mum

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    1. Hi Mum Zac here. Thank you for commenting on my sea week writing work. I reckon it was a positive and helpful comment thanks.

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